maine kuchh kaha aur usne kuchh kaha nahi
bas yahi gum hai aur to kuchh hua nahi
aisa nahi ki usne sunke unsuna kar diya mujhe
bas maine jo mehsus kiya usne kabhi kiya nahi
dil ki baat batakar uska bharosa to jeeta maine
magar ab apne aap par bharosa mujhe raha nahi
use masoom kahu laparwah kahu ya zalim kahu
woh meri baat smajhkar bhi jo samjha nahi
chand roz guzar jaane do woh bhul jayega use
chhoti si dil ki baat thi koi lamba vakiya nahi
jo dil toota ho kabhi kisi ki khamoshi se
woh dil kisi ke alfazo se kabhi juda nahi
For things that werent' left unsaid but were certainly avoided or left unheard.
honey you will have to translate this one for me. can't seem to understand what this means.
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ReplyDeleteso buddy how was your session with Mitchel? Enjoyed talking to him?
ReplyDeleteohhhh i have enjoyed it like anything. he has been a fantastic guide. can learn a lot from him. he has good visualization.
ReplyDeletei know you are a fantastic poet but i cant undertsand hindi ghazals as you call it. so pls start writing in english for me. and now you have mitch on board. he was very happy with you and your work. he is really impressed.
ReplyDeletedont jumnp on the horse so soon crissie. its still first session with mitch. let's see how it goes. and i cant write such good poetry in english. you will have to make do with hindi. i will translate it for you
ReplyDeletewho killed you with silence bb?
ReplyDeletethis is not me. i wrote it when i found somebody in this situation.
ReplyDeleteu r still a mystery to me. but at least u r letting these things out here. i was right. u can be honest only when u r writing. and when its poetry its beautiful. loved wht u posted yday. finally the idea of a blog is working.....
ReplyDeleteshe always denies it.bt my opinion is you can never express it so perfectly until n unles u hav had it.
ReplyDelete@my buddy. an honest confession, dont laugh bt actually i even dint knw exactly wt it means..i only knw it is smthin censored..
So finally you published your gazal..ok on the blog not like what i have been telling you since when i know you can put your thoughts out in such a nice way you know a book or at least a collection of small poetries..but still you have taken it out i am glad..and it's really good like somebody who really has a deep thinking. Coming to the idea of the gazal..i undstd it like you wanted to express it for somebody you know..but why i think there is confusion about proper communication i mean if and only if it is a real life situation on which you have written it...still..for your writing skills i liked it...
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